Josh W Video

This is the stage of my film that I showed at my mid point critique, it shows the basic idea and atmosphere I want to create but doesn't particularly follow the narrative although it takes imagery from the poem. I'm happy with the progress I've made at this point but it needs more structure and it needs to correspond with the poem. One idea that came up in the critique was to somehow visually show a musical canon because the poem repeats itself in several verses so I proceeded to come up with ways of putting this into action.